Writer's Support Room - Open Forum Transcripts

Open Forum, May 6, 2003

Event start time:

Tue May 06 14:54:46 2003

Event end time:

Tue May 06 16:08:22 2003



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kristi holl

Join us this afternoon in the AUDITORIUM-Scheduled Events Room for an "Open Forum" with Guest Moderator Kristi Holl. Kristi has published over 150 magazine articles and stories, as well as 24 books for the juvenile market. Kristi has combined teaching for fifteen years and raising six children with her writing, and welcomes your questions on time management, getting started, writer's block, marketing, or anything else you'd like to discuss. Bring your QUESTIONS to this open forum.

kristi holl

My stomach is already growling! Bring on the brownies!

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I had forgotten how much fun you all were!

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Okay, I think we're ready....

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let me post the usual announcements first,...

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and then I will start with some questions that I found in Mel's mailbox...

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that were addressed to me, I think, for the forum...

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I was only able to read the first of four pages of mail though...

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so I apologize if your particular question doesn't show up...

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and now where is stormy when I need her? GAVEL, GAVEL, GAVEL!!

kristi holl

Good afternoon! Welcome to this afternoon's "Open Forum" session. I'm your guest moderator and former web editor, Kristi Holl, and I'm delighted to be back here subbing for Mel while he's still away speaking. I see some familiar faces!! 8-) We're back for an informal time of answering any questions you might like to ask, on any subject. So feel free to ask what's on your mind! First, please read these announcements, then we'll get started.

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IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS: Send questions you'd like answered or discussed by using your "Ask a Question" icon/button. (It looks like a thought bubble icon, RIGHT NEXT TO THE RED QUESTION MARK.) The moderator (me, Kristi Holl) will post the questions one at a time in the chat room and do my best to answer them.

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WARNING: If you don't post anything at all, SOME of you will be bounced off the system in 15 minutes. TO PREVENT THIS, type something (either a question to the moderator or even a private message) every 15 minutes to stay active and remain online.

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And now the emailed questions first...

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Loretta: I joined SCBWI and have been a member for one year. I am unable to find any groups to meet with physically in my area. What do you suggest? Should I be meeting with children's writers groups for added support? I finished the Institutes writing course last week!! I am looking for added incentive to keep my writing skills in working order.

kristi holl

First, Loretta, congratulations on completing the course...

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that is an excellent sign that you have the stick-to-it-iveness it will take to be a published writer...

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you're welcome! ....

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Yes, I think it can only benefit you to meet with other writers, hopefully children's writers...

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to keep your writing incentive high and to have accountability...

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since you don't have a local writer's group, ...

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you may have to start one...

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when I moved to Florida, a writer here in town...

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who was also knew and wanted a group...

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put a small free ad in the local paper in the "announcements" part...

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saying she was starting a writing group...

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she also joined Friiend of the Library and mentioned it there...

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and she also posted a notice on the library's bulletin board for local announcements...

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she got about 8 responses, and 6 ended up forming the group...

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I would try something like that first to find some like-minded writers.

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Jillian: I have a question about copyright involving titles. Can you copyright a specific title? For example, let's say you wrote a mystery book called "The Red Barn" and sent in the manuscript and title to the LOC for copyright. Then you decided you could make a series and want to change the title of the first book to "The Red Barn - Case of the....". Would you need to apply for an additional copyright for the new title? (Even if the manuscript is basically the same.)

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Jillian, you can't copyright titles...

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although if you try to use a famous one (like a Harry Potter title) they won't let you...

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but if you decide to change the title, you don't need a new (expensive) copyright...

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I just went through this actually...

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I had copyrighted an e-book I wanted to publish--I had heard so much about e-publishing that I wanted to try it...

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and when the book was picked up by a print publisher, they changed the title a little...

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and tightened it and cut it down a little...

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but my copyright was still good for it, even with a modified title and content.

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Jillian: Along those lines, if you created a series do you need to copyright each book in the series? Or just the first book?

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Yes, you have to copyright each individual title.

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Taggy: My questions are about photographs. What do you write on the release? Do you send it on a separate piece of paper? One signature per page or all together? Should the photo be clipped to paper with caption underneath? I just don't know the basics!

kristi holl

On the release you just type that the person is giving you permission to use the photo for such-and-such an article...

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and leave a place for them to sign...

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if you are getting permission from one person for several photos, you can use one release form and list all the photos on that one form...

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I would clip the photo to the release form if you can do it without hurting the photo...

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some people put the title of the photo both on the form and on the back of the photo using a mailing label or felt tip pen so you don't hurt the photo.

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The main thing is to be sure the photos are identified and not injured by whatever you do...

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be sure they don't get dented by paper clips that are too tight or ball point pen writing on the back.

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Taggy: I have a nonfiction biography piece and all photos of the person seem to be from a certain Foundation. In my cover letter should I just say that the Foundation should be contacted for archives and release of photographs?

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Yes, they will be grateful for that information in your letter...

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if you have the contact information (address, phone number and/or email) put that in your letter too.

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Jacqueline: My question is about sending copies of an article to those whom I interviewed. For one article, I quoted eight different people and sent each of them a copy of the entire magazine containing the article. Now I've sold reprint rights to a magazine that doesn't pay as much and doesn't provide as many contributor copies. Would it be all right for me to photocopy the pages of the article and send it to the interviewees rather than purchase an entire magazine for each of them? For what some magazines pay for reprint rights, I'd be in the hole if I had to buy all those copies every time the article is reprinted.

kristi holl

Jacqueline, I think you were VERY generous in sending copies to all those people in the first place...

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I know that most writers never do as much...

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Most don't even send photocopies...

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but yes, sending a photocopy is perfectly fine...

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since they already have a copy of the article in the first magazine, don't feel obligated to send it again unless you really would like to...

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You could mail them in regular envelopes too, which is certainly cheaper than mailing a whole magazine.

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Karen: I do have a question I am hoping is not too crazy- I sent a ms. via email approx one month ago to a publishing co. However, I did not code as "return receipt" so I could monitor when it was received. Should I send an inquiry to ensure it was received - or do I just wait out the 1-3 month turnaround??? I am also thinking maybe I should send it hardcopy via snail mail and reference the email I sent???

kristi holl

Let's see, last question first...

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no, I wouldn't send a hardcopy, not yet anyway...

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If you emailed the submission a month ago, and their guidelines say their turnaround time is 1-3 months...

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then you can email any time now and ask if they received it...

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I wouldn't press for a decision on it, though, till the 3 months were up (or whatever their guidelines said)...

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Even with email submissions, we don't always know when it is received! Frustrating too!

kristi holl

For those of you joining us late, this is an "Open Forum" session where you are free to ask any writing and publishing questions you have, and your guest moderator (Kristi Holl) will do her best to answer them!

kristi holl

IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS: Send questions you'd like answered or discussed by using your "Ask a Question" icon/button. (It looks like a thought bubble icon, RIGHT NEXT TO THE RED QUESTION MARK.) The moderator (me, Kristi Holl) will post the questions one at a time in the chat room and do my best to answer them.

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WARNING: If you don't post anything at all, SOME of you will be bounced off the system in 15 minutes. TO PREVENT THIS, type something (either a question to the moderator or even a private message) every 15 minutes to stay active and remain online.

silverdove

Kristi, Im going to try to start a group at the local .....

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library.... can I please have some direction/advice.

silverdove

I would like to keep it for those interested in 0-11age grp.

kristi holl

If you're the one starting the group, it's perfectly fine if you specify that you are looking for people interested in a specific age group...

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if you don't get too many people--if your town is small, for example--you can always expand the age range later...

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some large children's groups also meet as a whole group to begin with...

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sharing their market news and setbacks and successes...

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but then, when it is time to critique,...

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they split into "under 12" and "over 12" age groups...

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so you could do that too if you don't get a huge response from an ad for "under 12" writers...

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My friend Jan got her biggest response from the ad in the paper...

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she ran it three times in three weeks, and gave the date of the first meeting and her phone number...

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and she screened people when they called her to get directions to her house...

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You can also meet in a library meeting room...

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that's what I would probably do until I knew the people better...

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my friend was braver than I would have been about inviting strangers to my house--I'm your basic chicken...

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but talk to your librarian and make sure there aren't groups already meeting too--she should know.

emi

Does any publisher need a release form for any photos used? Even iuniverse.com? And where do you obtain the release form., or do you draw it up yourself?

kristi holl

The people I knew who used them drew them up themselves--they are very very simple...

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but you could try typing "release form" in a search engine and see what you get...

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in the marketing books there are often such "forms" too...

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If the magazine needs a release form and you don't supply one, they will ask you for it before using it.

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Here is a suggestion from silverdove for the lady who was sending copies of the magazine to interview subjects...

silverdove

Why not just send an announcement to those in the magazine..

silverdove

telling them which mag its in and when?

kristi holl

I think that's a great idea...

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then they can buy and order copies if they so desire.

silverdove

I did speak to the director...and she is meeting with the ..

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board this week to make sure its ok.

kristi holl

When you're using a public building for your meeting...

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this is a good idea to do...that was smart to ask.

tawnya

how much does it cost to go to this school?

kristi holl

To be honest--and this isn't a copout--I don't know...

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I can tell you what I paid for it 24 years ago...

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but that wouldn't be too helpful!...

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I did the monthly payment plan...

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you can call 1-800-243-9645 and ask...

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for a Student Representative and get the information that way...

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I CAN tell you ...

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that there is a 100% moneyback guarantee now...

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you can take the whole course, but if you don't think it lived up to its claims...

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you can get a full refund, no questions asked, just by writing to the school and asking...

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you just have to complete the whole course first.

dtvest

can you request an instructor?

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Yes, you can...

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not all instructors have openings at all times...

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but I always encourage potential students to inquire...

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after studying the various resumes and seeing where you think you'd have a good 'match'...

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I got a lot of students who requested a Christian and/or someone with Christian publishing experience...

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and ones who requested someone who had published middle grade fiction...

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I think your best chances of success are when your instructor matches what you hope to write...

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especially if you're taking the book course or hope to write books at some point...

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I know that students can transfer for the same reason.

silverdove

For the photos..Kristi, you can buy clear plastic liners....

silverdove

at any paper store...like Staples, Office Max. That way no .

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clips are needed.

kristi holl

That is a MUCH better solution than what I gave earlier...

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and you can buy that stuff in bulk pretty cheaply at those big stores... thank you, silverdove.

kristi holl

I have some "cost of the course" info coming here...

iamnina

2 years ago the course was

mabrager

Tawnya, it cost me about tuition for the first course, and that was about a year ago. A real deal, considering the current exchange rate.

iamnina

with monthly payments of if that helps

kristi holl

And here is a happy former student with a lovely "plug" for the course, but I SWEAR i did not pay her to say this...8-)...

wendyhaber

I can say without any doubt that I wouldn't have published anything without the Institute of Children's Literature. The invaluable help from Kristi, my instructor, online forums and interviews, and the course made it all possible. It made me believe that I could do it as long as I worked hard. I'm now taking the second magazine course and also signed up for the course with the LRWG. I believe in it. I recommend it to everyone I know who is interested in writing.

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Wow! I am blushing!

gladys

I would like to query an agent, but I have no publishing...

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...credits to date. I finished my middle-grade novel and...

gladys

...I'm ready to send it out. How should I go about this?

gladys

I don't know whether to send my ms to a targeted publisher..

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...or to query an agent first. I've narrowed them down to 3.

kristi holl

gladys, have I got a book for you!!!!...

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I just TODAY started reading a book from Writer's Digest...

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called THE PUBLISHING GAME: FIND AN AGENT IN 30 DAYS...

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and it gives you chapters to read first to decide if you even want an agent...

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and it gives you many, many things to consider...

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too many to write here...

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and after that, if you want to pursue getting an agent...

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it gives you six weeks of daily things to do (Monday through Friday)...

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to land an agent of your choice...

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From what you said, you've done what they recommend...

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having the book manuscript complete BEFORE looking for an agent...

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they made a big point of that here...

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Anyway, from what I can tell so far, I think this would be a very helpful book to you...

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you can order it online at Amazon and have it in just a few days...

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the step-by-step approach of pointing out each thing to do...

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is so helpful! Takes care of the confusion!

kristi holl

For those of you joining us late, this is an "Open Forum" session where you are free to ask any writing and publishing questions you have, and your guest moderator (Kristi Holl) will do her best to answer them!

kristi holl

IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS: Send questions you'd like answered or discussed by using your "Ask a Question" icon/button. (It looks like a thought bubble icon, RIGHT NEXT TO THE RED QUESTION MARK.) The moderator (me, Kristi Holl) will post the questions one at a time in the chat room and do my best to answer them.

kristi holl

WARNING: If you don't post anything at all, SOME of you will be bounced off the system in 15 minutes. TO PREVENT THIS, type something (either a question to the moderator or even a private message) every 15 minutes to stay active and remain online.

kristi holl

Thank you for waiting while I sort through the questions...

mabrager

Who's the author of this book, Kristi?

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Oops, sorry! It's Fern Reiss. and it's published by...

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believe it or not...

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Peanut Butter and Jelly Press.

mbvoelker

I don't remember my exact monthly payment but it was only a little more than my DirecTV bill. And I don't even have movie channels.

peanut

I registered in December 2002 and the cost over 14 monthly payments will be CDN.

dixiegirl

Any helps on finding time to read and write?

kristi holl

I do believe that is our eternal problem as writers...

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because we are also mothers and wives and church workers and day job workers and taking care of parents and neighbors and have health issues...

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and with children out of school for the summer (or in my case, a teacher husband)...

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it's a real challenge...

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This is an awful thing to do, but I am going to plug my own book...

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this month the Institute will start selling my Writer's First Aid book from their bookstore...

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and it is full of 40+ articles about this very thing...

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things I learned and read about finding time to write through health issues and single parent issues and moving and money crunches and...

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all the other things like divorces that derail us--or try to...

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I encourage you to all get the book on a trial basis...

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because I saw in the ads that you can look at it and read it for 30 days and return it, no questions asked...

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so if money is tight, order and read it in less than 30 days--you have my permission!...

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I do think you'll find a lot of good tips there.

silverdove

When I get a contract who can I talk to about translating it

silverdove

Is anyone available at ICL?

kristi holl

I don't believe anyone at ICL does any advising on contracts...

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at least, not that I know of...

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there are good books on negotiating and interpreting contracts available through Writer's Digest, and also...

kristi holl

Harold Underdown has an article or two on this at his website The Purple Crayon at www.underdown.org

zoelynn

Smallfellow press. Do you have any recent knowledge of them? They were listed in the Feb 2002 Childrens Writer newsletter, but they are not in any current listings I can find. However they still have a website, but no guidelines on their website just email and snailmail addresses...

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I am wracking my brain, but I don't recall anything about them...

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it doesn't sound particularly good if they have disappeared from the 2003 listings, but...

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and this often does happen...

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they may simply not have replied to the update request from the market books...

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because they were flooded with manuscripts or don't need any more right now...

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I would send an SASE with a note to them and simple say that you can't find them in the listings this year and are they still accepting submissions, and if so, would they send you their guidelines...

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you can't go wrong with that.

kristi holl

Here's some great help for the contract reading...

cup

Susan Titus Osborn reads contracts for

cup

I was well saitsfied and helped with her expertise.

kristi holl

cup, do you have any contact info you could post for Susan?

silverdove

I went to their website...sent email only to have it return.

silverdove

They will not deal with snail mail ..only email.

kristi holl

I think you have your answer then.. They sound out of business.

taggy

Get books on tape - read whilst you do the washing up!

kristi holl

Good time saving tip!

zoelynn

they were former owners of Price Stern Sloan Pub. Leonard Stern and Larry Sloan..

mabrager

Is Writer's Digest something we can subscribe to, and if so, who do we contact?

kristi holl

yes, the magazine by that name is subscription only...

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check and see if your library has it first, if you like,...

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I used to just photocopy the articles I was interested in--was cheaper...

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but you can subscribe online...

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you can also joing Writer's Digest Book Club online or through an ad in their magazine.

gladys

Thank's Kristi! I've browsed the AAR Web site...

gladys

How can I vastly improve my chances of an agent wanting...

gladys

...to read my ms? It's called "Ding-Dang-Dong it, Ms. Diddle

kristi holl

My brain just glitched...was this a novel? I am assuming it was...

kristi holl

since agents don't handle short stories...

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the best way to interest an agent is the same for whatever you've written...

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it needs to be fresh and catchy and intriguing and...

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and it needs to be scrupulously rewritten till it is so polished it shines...

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And I would read some articles on how to approach an agent and what to put in a query, etc. to make sure you send them what they want, but no more.

kristi holl

WARNING: If you don't post anything at all, SOME of you will be bounced off the system in 15 minutes. TO PREVENT THIS, type something (either a question to the moderator or even a private message) every 15 minutes to stay active and remain online.

silverdove

Find a room with a lock on the inside and shut the door.

kristi holl

Yes, I wrote in the bathroom sometimes!

kay kay

How long do you give an editor to consider your ms if they've already said they like it and are passing it around the magazine? One magazine in particular's response time is 4 weeks. It's now been over 2 months. They said they like it, but when are they gonna give me an answer?!

kristi holl

I would most definitely write or email and ask them...

kristi holl

If they've already gone over their response time by that much, they should not mind a query asking about the status. Do ask.

kay kay

Where can you get books on tape like that? The library?

kristi holl

Yes, the library for free ones...

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and you can check them out in some bigger video stores...

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and you can buy them cheap (used) online ...

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do a search for "used audio books".

peanut

How do we provide a resume with a query if we are submitting for the first time and have no previous writing experience?

kristi holl

A resume isn't the same as publishing credits...

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So anything that would pertain to your idea would be good...

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if you are querying about an idea for a craft for preschoolers, for example,...

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do tell them if you taught art or preschool or had a preschool Sunday School class...

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or whatever might qualify you to write on this subject...

kristi holl

None of us had impressive resumes to begin with or publishing credits to list...

kristi holl

and publishers know this...it is still the quality of your writing that will see your ms, not your resume.

wendyhaber

Audio Book Club is great!

lodger

the only books on tape I've seen are novels & stuff. are there any books on writing on tape?

kristi holl

Oh definitely!...let me give you a few titles of mine...

kristi holl

also, before I forget,...

kristi holl

you can get tapes of conferences you can't attend...

kristi holl

for example, I couldn't go to the Write-to-Publish conference in Chicago last year that I wanted to...

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but I got on their website and ordered l0 of the tapes (five dollars each) of the sessions I wish I could have attended...

kristi holl

I've listened to them over and over...

kristi holl

many conferences sell these tapes after the conference is over...

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and certainly for a fraction of the cost of the conference!...

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Anyway, here are some tapes you might like....

kristi holl

I have a two tape set by Anne Lamott who wrote BIRD BY BIRD...

kristi holl

and it's called "Word by Word"...it's great...from Writer's Digest book club...

kristi holl

And i have a two-tape set of Julia Cameron of The Artist's Way and Natalie Goldberg of Writing Down the Bones called...

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"A Conversation on The Writing Life"...

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and I have a Sol STein tape from a workshop called ...

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"How to Make Your Manuscript 98% Better"...

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So, yes, listening to tapes in the car or your headset while you clean house or whatever is a good use of writing time.

kristi holl

Ooops. I see we were out of time a few minutes ago...

kristi holl

Thank you all for coming...

kristi holl

it's been such fun to do this again..

kristi holl

I had forgotten how FAST the time goes!...

kristi holl

Mel will be back home tomorrow, I think, and ready to regale you about his trips!...

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You all take care, and let me hear from you from time to time. Bye for now!

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